First of all, here's my Mario Kart wii friend code. 5112-3827-9319

This game runs so smooth! I enjoy it very much, and it doesn't hinder my skills at all. The Grand Prix 150cc can still piss you off though. There still a lot of last minute Blue Shell/ item pummeling bullcrap. It happens a lot in the 100cc this time as well! But Online is a better experience! Why didn't brawl use the channels? It needed it.

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Okay, this ISN'T the final prolouge. I just posted this for feedback. From this character, I want to know what I need to keep a eye on to assure a great read for everyone.

Now the final prolouge will be somewhat like this. I can't explain who info on what's what at the moment. And yes, this does comfirm more friend in the story.

You don't have to tell me about spelling and grammar. I'll handle that on my own.



The Other Side

Tentative Prologue

This is our world. It is here that we are free to do whatever we want. This was the truth until a new order came and stole it us. It is said that imagination alone can destroy this force, but many chose to flee than fight and now that power reigns over the world. Now this threat grew to another level, as the story began.

-Highway City-

Highway city was the first to suffer. There was no freedom for anyone every since the MOD were ordered to crackdown on crime. Two individuals, Arbok X and HackerHater62 were under presuit by two MOD officers with one order, to capture anyone who were to oppose as a threat to the expansion.

Arbok X: Hacker, you found the location of Never Manors yet?

HackerHater62: Yeah, it's right there! *points to it out the window* However, finding a quick route is difficult. I'll keep searching. *searches through the databanks* What street we're on?

Arbok X: Mario Dr. No Link Ave. NO! Warp Star Blvd!

HackerHater62: Whatever! *checks* Okay, keep going, go over the draw bridge, ten more blocks after that and we are there! *dodges gun fire* Oh man, they're closing in!

Arbok X: *Sees the draw bridge rising* Ohh... crap. *speeds up* Hope we make it! Come on, Red Yoshi!

The boys knew that this moment was do or die. They had to find information on the goverment and hopefully anyway to stop it. The bridge was now three times the car's size. Arbok X and HackerHater62 brace themselves as they took flight and made the jump, gaining a huge amount of distance.

Both: OH YEAH! WOOO! YES!!!! *sees a wall flying at them.* ... AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! *crash. They were able to get out. MOD cars arrives.*

Officer: Get on the ground! Right now! *Rushes out and forces them on the ground.* You have the right to remain slient! Anything you say...

Arbok X: Don't give me the speech Hen. You and CrazyCougar caught us. Just take us off to the dump.

Hen: Don't make this anymore difficult then this is. I'm sorry, but rules are rules.

Hen and CrazyCougar took them to the jail nearby and locked them up. Arbok X and HackerHater62 knew that the to officers weren't please to do what they did as they left slowly and sadly. CrazyCougar then waited in the car. Hen was answering a call from the boss

Hen: Yes LeMint. They're behind bars. Everything is still a secret.

Lemint: Good. These people are ungrateful. I provide a strong and stable goverment for them, and they repay me with rebellion. Hen, I must say, you sound a little unhappy about your job. Why is that?

Hen: *sigh* You know why, Lemint. Don't play with me.

Lemint: Oh, that. Well I assure that you're doing a great job. And as long as you continue, and don't side away from your duty, I'll keep my word.

Hen: *holds her neck bracelet* Understood. Hen, out. *ends transmission. walks back into car.*

CrazyCougar: So, What did he say? *Hen says nothing*

Hen: Let's go. *drives off*

YoshiUnity Presents: The Other Side

-The Imagineer-

On the Imagineer, There were five friends who wanted isolation from what the world has become. The Captain, YoshiUnity; Second in command, Bowser81889; Navigator, Simpson_Luver; Engineer, Mr.Nintendork; and Tactican, Purple Pikmin. There's a six friend named Sparklez who wanted to go on a retreat for a while. She contact the Imagineer to check up on everyone.

YoshiUnity: Great to see ya, Sparklez. How's the trip coming along?

Sparklez: Oh, it's wonderful! *Sips lemonade* Animapolis is truly me. I couldn't thank you guys enough for this!

YoshiUnity: No prob, as a matter fact... *Simpson_Luver pushes him out of the way.* SL wanted to talk to... you.

Simpson_Luver: Hey Sparklez! You have to tell me everything... *Bowser81889 enters. Sees YoshiUnity on the ground*

Bowser81889: Sparklez called again? *Yoshi stands up and nods.* You know she's only been gone for three days and just called two hours ago? She must really miss this place.

YoshiUnity: No, she miss us. Because after the incident with the cookie jar, she DEFINETELY needed a break. *connection interference with Sparklez.* Oh no.

Simpson_Luver: What the... Sparklez, you there? *connection diminishes* Crap! *Yells in the transmitter.* Hey Dork! You need to check this out! *Dork comes in*

Mr.Nintendork: You know, you don't yell in a transmitter. You TALK in it! *works on the screen.* Nothing seems wrong... *fixes itself.* There we go. *Purple Pikmin arrives.*

Purple Pikmin: Yo guys! *turns channel.* We got company!

Everyone saw that they were surrounded by MOD jets. They where ordered to land but refused. YoshiUnity told everyone to prepare themselves for The MODs as the forcefully board the ship.